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Halloween Party
There are some occasions that happen once a year.It is when kids strt to frighten people, and "Trick or treat smell my feet give me something good to eat" is what some of them say on such occasions.These occasions are called Halloween parties.

Decoration is an important feature of Halloween parties. The lights are blazing all over the place.Huge, small,and scary pumpkins with candles inside of them ornated the party.Fake ghosts are hanged from the ceiling; every ghost has its unique and horrifying look.

Halloween costumes are what the whole party is about.Every person in the party is wearing a special costume, terrifying scream masks and outfits,adoring princesses,red and green mermaid costumes,and yellow squeezy sponges (sponge bob square pants).

Who forgets to get food to a party like this? A huge,orange,delicious pumpkin cake centered the dining room.On the right is the soft drinks and other tasty refreshments.On the left lay the desserts dishes.

All the three essential features make up a marvelous,gorgeous,and awesome Halloween party.People have a wonderful time in such parties, especially the ones made in the middle east (because they don't usually celebrate such a party) and some people have trouble sleeping afterwards. ( because they get scared in the party).

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Hagrid

Be sure you keep your tense the same throughout the essay, so change "ornated" (which you can't even say) to "ornate", and "hanged" (which in proper past tense is "hung") to "hang". Your final sentence is a little weak. In the conclusion, talk about why it's such a big deal, why people have fun, how memorable it is; you know, leave the reader with an impression, or rather knowing exactly how you feel.