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1. Date: November seventh, 1805

From the journal of Clark…

I was a man that experienced childhood in Kentucky and Virginia. Joined the Virginia military at that point joined the Army. Who might have felt that I would be seeing all that I have seen on the grounds that I was approached to help lead this undertaking? Toward the beginning of today we began early, and it is an overcast and desolate day. We get together with the Native Americans today to exchange supplies on a wide range of islands. At that point, we arrived at column rock and I can hear the sea today. The sound of the waves smashing on the rocks. we should draw near to it now. The Native American has helped us today by showing us down the waterway. I can't stand by until I see the Pacific Ocean.

2. Date: Tuesday June eighteenth, 1805

From the journal of Lewis…

When I was a military skipper, a lawmaker, and now I am a pioneer. I'm gladly taking a request by President Jefferson. I'm taking 30 men alongside myself included, and we are decided to investigate an obscure area. I have committed a lot of time inspecting records composed by other's who have seen segments of the domain previously. I have been told by President Jefferson to make a guide with another course to the Pacific Ocean, archive and assemble examples, alongside taking notes on exercises, in this way, it tends to be concentrated later. I should assemble however much data as could be expected concerning the topography and individuals I go over in this convincing excursion. We may confront outrageous difficulties in our future like starvation, depletion, infection, unforgiving conditions, and climate conditions. We are wanting to get a lot of help from locals as voyaging toward the west.

3. Date: February 11, 1805

From the journal of Sacagawea …

I'm a Shoshone Indian and am the spouse of Toussaint Charbonneau. I was hijacked when I was 12 by the Hidatsa Indians. Lewis and Clark employed my significant other to be and mediator for them. Today I brought forth my child we named him Jean Baptiste. The torment was so drawn-out and agonizing. He is a fine-looking child kid. He is my first kid

4. Date: August 24, 1804

From the journal of York…

I'm William Clark's body worker since Mr. Clark was 14 years of age. I deal with Mr. Clark. Today I went chasing to make some stew to take care of him. I shot two deer and minded them back. I need to be free, however I am endeavoring to help and see all that I can. The excursion is hard, yet I am getting a charge out of having the option to proceed to chase.

When I was a child I lived in Kentucky and Virginia. Eventually, I joined the Virginia Army. I have seen unbelievable things since I joined the Army. One early dreary morning, we got together with the Native Americans to exchange supplies from the islands. That day, we arrived at column rock and I could hear the sea and the waves smashing on the rocks. The Native Americans helped us today by showing us how to get to the waterway. I can't wait to see the Pacific Ocean.

From Lewis's Journal

Date: June 18, 1805

I have been a military skipper, a lawmaker, and now I am a pioneer. President Jefferson requested that I take 30 men and myself to investigate an obscure area. I have spent a lot of time inspecting records of what other's have seen before me. President Jefferson asked me to make a guide with an alternative course to the Pacific Ocean. In the guide, he wants me to draw examples of landmarks and take notes. This keeps my mind busy. I have to keep as much data as possible about the terrain so others can take this same journey. I am sure that we will experience difficulties in our future like starvation, depletion, infections, unforgiving conditions, and climate conditions. Hopefully, we will find locals willing to help as we travel west.

From Sacagawea Journal

Date February 11, 1805

I am a Shoshone Indian and the spouse of Toussaint Charbonneau. I was kidnapped when I was 12 by the Hidatsa Indians. Lewis and Clark employed my husband to be a mediator for them. Today, I had my forth child, Jean Baptiste. The labor was long and agonizing, but he is a fine looking child and he is mine.

From York Journal

Date August 24, 1804

I have been William Clark's personal servant since I was 14 years old. I deal with Mr. Clark daily. Today I had hunt and I killed two deer that later became stew for Mr. Clark. I need to be free but I also like to travel and see all that he see's. This excursion is hard, but I like getting to hunt and travel.