Lydia4072
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I need opinions on this poem can you give me advice?

Anger is a big emotion
Letting it go might cause a commotion.
Anger is strong
It can cause you to stay up all night long.
Learn to control.
Let that anger roll.
Don't let it go
If you solve the problem, you'll feel a glow
Believe
Receive
Relieve
Smile
And try to make it last awhile
It's beautiful
It's very suitable.
Laugh
It sounds great
Don't say you hate.
You're beautiful
Just the way you are.

Respuesta :

It's very good, and is very clear about the message.
very good. Tells about common emotions which really makes the audience feel it