I did this and turned it in, I got a C on it, could you tell me what to fix so I can get an A?

Question:
The aftermath of Hurricane Katrina left the cities of New Orleans and Baton
Rouge with a housing shortage. Using your economic knowledge gained in
this unit, explain the concepts of limited resources, scarcity, and
supply/demand through the following scenario.
Imagine that you are College Student who is placing a Classified Ad in the
local Newspaper. In your ad, you are searching for Affordable Housing.
Make sure that you include accurate and logical information based on what
you have learned about Katrina and its economic aftermath.

What I wrote:
“Hello, I am looking for an affordable 1+ bedroom apartment to live in. My home
was recently destroyed by hurricane Katrina, as well as many other homes
causing there to be a limited supply of housing. Due to the limited supply of
housing on the market, the demand and prices have increased greatly. Please
make sure the price range is around 1,000 - 2,500. I need to be with in a 15 mile
radius of LSU. ”