marcalbenton35 marcalbenton35

03-04-2019
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Hello, I really need help on an essay. Can anyone tell me what's wrong with it or changes I need to make. I will have 2 files below showing the assignment and my essay. I would really appreciate your help.

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thammer thammer

03-04-2019

I don't think you need to say a "A famous poet and playwright named William Shakespeare has retold this story. "

Instead i think you should say "The renowned poet and playwright William Shakespeare has retold this story. ""

But otherwise you did really well

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