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Review the following essay. Which pair of sentences needs to be revised?
Living in Centerville
1-Centerville is a good place to live because it has great schools and a welcoming community.
Centerville's schools are excellent with wonderful teachers. The schools have excellent teachers who are experts in their fields. 2- In addition,
students can pick from a wide variety of sports and other activities. 3-Centerville's schools are so respected that students from other towns come
here for a good education.
Centerville is also well-known for its warm and friendly citizens. Indeed, my family and I have made a lot of dear friends here.
4- In short, Centerville offers the best of small town American life. Nowhere else will you find so many fun things to do and so many wonderful
people who care about you.

Respuesta :

Answer:4

Life in Centervillehas been summarized

Answer:

hi! the answer is A, aka the 1st paragraph. i know this because it says "Centerville’s schools are excellent with wonderful teachers. The schools have excellent teachers who are experts in their fields." i feel that they have said the word "excellent" too many times, even though it was twice, because it is a short group of words. i hope this helps you!

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