Verb Usage 8.2: Question 4
The following is from a student's rough draft essay. She needs to
revise her writing to use literary present tense. What is the best
revision?
At the start of Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone, Harry finds out
he is a wizard. One of his first stops was Diagon Alley, where he
visited the wizard bank and purchased items for school.
Select one:
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At the start of Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone, Harry found out he was a
wizard. One of his first stops was Diagon Alley, where he visited the wizard bank
and purchased items for school.