Boy Line:
Sorry can't think straight, sorry for this pain I create, got a lot on my mind right now, feel like im gonna drown now. [(girl)ooohoo mhm) don’t know why but i want to die, the depression is real, all my friends are fake, why don’t they listen to my pain.
Girl Line:


im in a nightmare dont know when ill wake, demons are chasing me, my mind is racing, suicidal thoughts are the only thing thats pacing, anxiety ridden emotions hidden,i hate the world that i live in,i wanna be dead with a bullet in my head, my body is numb, have nowhere to run, so i cut my wrists cuz when i die i wont be missed, my life is worthless no one cares, im already dead my life is a mess, tell my mom ill see her in hell, she only cares for the drugs she sells, crying is usless the world is ruthless, got no one to love but people to hate if my dad was alive hed say im a discrace, but look whos alive my worthless A##

I'm editing this song for my friend and I want to know if you think its good so far and if you could think of some lines I could add
(the boy lines are rap the girl lines wont be..)