By using the word “as” in this sentence, does it sound suitable? If not, what should I put instead of that?
“As I was so desperate hiding in the bushes, I saw a snake.”
i think it is suitable but if you were having to add something i would make it As i was so desperate hiding in the bushes, i stayed calm when i saw the snake.
Explanation:
i dont know if that something you could add but i hope this helps.
