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This journal entry will be completed in two parts. In this lesson, you will examine how different sentence types can add

variety and interest to writing. Part of your learning will involve revising your own writing to improve sentence variety.

Now, before continuing with the lesson, you will complete the first half of your entry.

Write a short, four-to five-sentence

paragraph about a topic of your choosing.

Then, after you have completed this lesson, come back to the paragraph you wrote. Analyze your writing to identify

areas where you could revise using different sentence types to add interest to your work. Revise the paragraph using

the techniques you have learned. Your completed journal entry should have both your original and your revised

paragraph.

Will someone please help me?

Or explain this to me how I do this? Please

Respuesta :

Answer: After reading the labels, I think we don't need soda, candy and ice cream because it can affect your health. Breakfast cereal, Canned and frozen fruit are the most nutrient food. Cereal will provide you some source of sugar and energy in the morning, canned and frozen fruit will provide you the most nutrient during the day and evening. Ice cream, candy bar and soda are the least nutritious food because they have excessive amount of sugar and it's not good for your health to consume a lot of sugar in a day.

Explanation: Hope this help :D