Which is the best peer review of the paragraph below? Another example of how Frankenstein's passion led to death is Elizabeth's death. The monster that Frankenstein created in his passion for science murdered the woman for whom he had great passion. In this case, two of Frankenstein's passions, one intellectual and one amorous, combined to result in Elizabeth's death. A. This is pretty short. You should add more. B. Your sentence variety is not very good in this paragraph. Reword the second sentence so it doesn't start with the subject. C. The argument is good, but you need to add textual evidence of the two passions to back it up.