Chapter One (Toothpaste does not taste amazing)

Every Morning is a cold, sunny day. Nothing would ever change. Just Never. The weather would always be cold and sunny. The time would always be something called “It does not work”. Inside The kingdom of Su, you could see that one house. The house that is perched on top of the purple and pink tree. The leaves on the tree would always cover the windows, yet every day pink snowflakes would stick on the windows, just waiting patiently for it to be melted with the roaring fire. Inside a room of the little house, Linavigua (Lina-Vi-Gooa) grabbed her toothpaste and toothbrush. Time to eat. Wait- no. It’s time to brush some teeth. Wait-no. There is no time. So confusing. Well,it’s time to use some magic.Wait-no. It is time to use some multitasking! but there is no time. So confusing. Lina or Luviga (Linavigua's nicknames but she prefers Luviga)grabbed her toothbrush, squeezing some toothpaste on there. Then she ran down the stairs. Clomp, Clomp, Clomp. Wait-no, that was for breakfast. She grabbed the first thing she saw. A milk jug which was sitting on the table. Really, the milk jug had legs and was sitting on the table. “Well I guess it’s time for some breakfast.”. Drinking milk on one side of her mouth while she brushed the other side- that’s indeed called multitasking. Suddenly, she spit everything out. “Disgusting” she yelled. “Toothpaste doesn't taste amazing”.

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Obviously, toothpaste doesn't taste well and it is most certainly recommended to NOT consume it for safe reasons. But, common sense instead of eating it and more importantly drinking milk with it is pretty weird too. Why not just try brushing your teeth like a regular human being and if you don't prefer the taste of regular mint flavored toothpaste, there are different other flavors of toothpaste that you could purchase.