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i need help writing a conclusion for an essay about how people should be able to make their own decisions

this is what i have so far

Everyone has the right or privilege to make decisions for themselves; every time someone was denied the right to make their own choices - it was not pleasant, to say the least. There are somewhere around 332.4 million people living in the United States, imagine what would happen if the government just suddenly started making all of our decisions for us.
I think we should be able to make our own decisions, firstly, because of the first amendment, which protects us against government limits on our freedom of expression and the making of our own choices and secondly, if the government just made all of our decisions for us then life would be so boring, there would be no adventure, no fun, and we wouldn’t really be doing anything for ourselves anymore. For example in the text of Ban the Ban it states in paragraph two, “I agree wholeheartedly that obesity is an issue that needs to be addressed. It is one that needs to be addressed with education, compassion and support, not government mandates. If, despite all those efforts, someone chooses to have a sugary drink anyway, that is their choice and their right. If they know all the facts and they do it anyway, that is a personal choice. It is not the place of our elected officials to intervene.” I very much agree with this statement, because this is a problem that needs to be addressed.
Another reason I think people should be able to make there own decisions is because just like in the video of Aleeza Kazmi, when her teacher said she was using the wrong color for her face in the self portrait the had drawn, she decided not to let that control her later on in life when their had been another incident in her 6th grade class, and took a stand. This may not seem like much of an example, but when you take a stand you are making the decision to stand up for yourself, and what you believe in.