kkcrispy2
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There needs to be a radical change in the system our society is built upon. A point of focus should be directed towards our existing infrastructure: are they built with sustainability in mind? If not, can they be adapted? These attitudes should be employed with every bit of architecture that is constructed, sustainably moulding a future in which the foundations of our societies are strong and exemplify eco-friendly outlooks.

Does this make sense? If not how can I adapt it?