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Write a poem describing what you did and how you felt. Experiment with the rhyme scheme in your poem, just as modern poets did. After your poem, include a brief explanation of the rhyme scheme, structure, and literary devices that you used.

Respuesta :

The demons I have 
are seen inside
But dont try and find them
Or the monster will rise

I dont want to hurt you
But my demons have minds
Ones that I have no control

Im sorry I did
But it's my fault
Please take my hand
And we take it from 
off this land

This poems( I know it may be bad) reminds me of the time that the demon inside was released and hurt somebody that I love very much.





In this neighborhood in Queens,

I watch the neighbor teens

play without a care,

As alone I sit and stare.

I don’t play basketball

for I’m not very tall.

They dribble and drive forward,

While I sit and look onward.

Anyway I would rather write

Than shoot, dodge, and fight.

I decided to join them today,

I wondered what they would say

No knowledge or skill,

Just there for the thrill,

And so they turned me away,

They didn’t let me have my say.

Just because I’m not tall

doesn’t mean I can’t play ball!

Anyway I would rather write

Than shoot, dodge, and fight.

This poem uses a set end rhyme scheme, aabb ccdd ee. There is also a set structure. The first and second stanzas have four lines, the third has two, the fourth and fifth stanzas have four, and the sixth has two. Some of the thoughts run across lines, using enjambment. Also, the repetition of the lines in the third stanza, which also make up the sixth stanza, highlight the speaker’s denial of feeling bad about being excluded.

Explanation:

From Plato