i had to write a new essay can y'all proofread it please:


Most parents are unsure whether their student listening to music during class and while doing homework is a good thing. Parents are scared that listening to music will effect their students grades and lower them majorly. I personally think not because i'm a young teen who loves music. My mom used to hate it if I listened to music while doing school work but finally she gave in and now she lets me listen to music while I do my work. I usually listen to encouraging or motivational music but, I listen to music so much that I forget to keep the songs on encouraging ones. My grades aren't really effected by music though. It is not the music that effects the students grades. It is whether they grasp the concept and i was actually taught a really important skill music can help me with, the skill is say you have remember a formula for a math problem, turn PEMDAS into a song or a rhyme. I learned the skill from my Uncle.
Some beats have been proven to actually help develope critical thinking and help with mathematical concepts. Also music can make someone more energetic. According to an article that was published in the "Jornal of educational psychology" Glenn E. Schellenberg established that a child's IQ and academic performance can be improved by taking music lessons. Schellenberg notes that the effct of the music is even larger when the lessons are taken at longer times. "Encourage your student to go to a music lesson as often as possible to enhance your child's grades in school." states Schellenberg. Having music play in the background creates a relaxed atmosphere while your child studies and helps enhance concentration during studying. Music helps build a child's confidence too but, listening to music while studying doesn't help all children.
Remember how when you were younger you were taught a song to learn the alphabet and the song went "A, B, C, D, E, F, G, H, I, J, K, L, M, N, O, P, Q, R, S, T, U, V, W, X, Y, AND Z. Now I know my ABC's next time won't you sing with me.", well it helped you learn the alpphabet didn't it so why can't other music help? You were also probably taught rhymes and other song to remember other things as well. Sometime though music won't effect a student at all.
In my opinion music is an amazing way to escape or show your feelings because not only is it good for improving grades but it can also help with depression. I should know that it helps with sadness and depression because music has actually helped me fight depression. I believe that if people actually focused on making encouraging music than a lot of kids, teens, and even adults would actually not worry if everyone is going to like them. Music can connect people too such as if you like a specific band and I like the same band. Music can also change your mood from sad to happy, or mad to understanding, or from selfdoubt to confidence. Just think if music can change your mood and make you confident about your choices then just think what it could if you played music in a classroom, just think how much grades would increase, and how much depression would decrease, I imagine that one day teachers, tutors, and parents everywhere will play music while their students are testing, doing schoolwork, and doing homework.
In 6th grade my math teacher would play classical music and make up rhymes so that we would have a better understanding and so that we were relaxed. It is also said that Thomas Jefferson used music to help write the Declaration of Independence. When he couldn't think of what to write he would play his violin until he had a thought of what to put on the Declartion of Independence. Albert Einstien one of the smartest men to ever live did extremely poor in school and instead of his parents following his teachers advice they bought him a violin. He learned fairly quickly to play it and music became the one thing that brought him to the success of being one of the smartest men to ever live on earth. Einstien has even claimed that the reason he was so smart was because the music from the violin helped. It is proven that music can relax and slow down the heart beat if it is soft and increase the beat of the heart if the music is fast.

thanks worth 29 points because it is so long.